19th Century Humanities
11/10/2010 06:33:45

heyyy ingrid, its sabrina.
i REALLY like the layout of your entire webpage, it's extremely easy to navigate which is most definitely a plus.
Onto your essay,
I like how you state an important statement then add in details for each paragraph--the development is strong. I'd recommend adding a little bit more on the mechanisation of the 19th century and possibly use a little stronger word choice. Overall, fantastic job!


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